Should school start early

This term in writing we have been learning how to do persuasive writing .  This week we got to chose different topics and I chose should school start early. pleases give me same feed back about my writing and what I cud ad next time and your opinion about should school early.

Should school start early

In my opinion school should start early for the following reasons.

Reason 1 like many people like myself parents and children's  work and school starts at the same time.

For example if a student and parent school starts at the same time and the parent has to very fast drop there child of even though  the parent and the child are both already late.

Reason 2 if school started early then parents would not have worry about school and work time mach anymore.

For example sens school will be starting earlier than work parents will get more time to prepare for work

Reason 3 if school start erle thin students would be on time for things

For example school will end erle because school started late and instead of coming home and watching tv they can do there homework will they are waiting for there tv program to star. 

In conclusion I believe school should start erle.