A (KA)

1. Maryanne
2. Dad
3. Mum
4. Cowch
5. Dads work mats

A (KB)

Marryanne

1. Short shtrat orange hair
2. Two or sometimes one small pike bowe
3. Two  big dark eyes
4. Cream light skin
5. Tall
6. fit

B (CB)

Office the local centre of a large business

Evening the period of time at the end of the day, usually from about 6 p.m. to bedtime

Beach run or haul up (a boat or ship) on to a beach

Soccer a form of football played by two teams of eleven players with a round ball which may not be handled during play except by the goalkeeper

A (AA)

1. Short shtrat orange hair
2. Two or sometimes one small pike bowe
3. Two  big dark eyes
4. Cream light skin
5. Tall
6. Fit

A (EA)

I give the text that I am reading this week a 10 out of 10 because it was funny.

Example sentences

At one game dad got a really good view by standing on top of a fence.

But he fell off and broke his arm when I scored the winning goal.

Another time he got a red card from the ref for sounding like a pack of wolves.

C NIC

At the ending of the story Maryanne scored the winning goal and wasn't enberst by her father any more.

But instead of Maryannes team winning and her not being enberst by her father I am going to ….

My ending

Change the ending by not making Maryannes team win and her being mor inberst by her father then every before.

Description writing

By Aveen

As the sun begins to set the sky turns dark and when it's time for lights out the engine begins to go up.

Then a hundred random buttons began to light and the sky turns orange and yellow the plane is up.

The captain glasses began to shine orange and yellow his grayish brownish hair turns a nice rose gold and as do his pale pink t-shirt.

When the sun begins to raise the stars go away and when it's time to land in Auckland it's also time to say good-bye.

        

Description writing

By Aveen

On a beach of the coast of England are two horse riders from bright fields. Jade and Gabby radding free on there on there horses with the wind blowing their hair. There horses are dark brown fast and big with long soft mans as flowing as a peacock's tail.

      

Going to my cousin zhyans house

In the last week of the holidays on thursday evening i went to my cousin zhyans house.

When we first got there zhyan told me not to go in their room with the tv because she was doing something in there but she said i could watch tv in there living room.

While i was watching tv one of my other cousins Hasraw came in the living room and i was pretty exiled because he is one of my fav cousins.

While i was watching tv and he was on his phone he asked me if a we'd like some chocolate cake and i said yes i was so excited because i had not had chocolate cake in a long time.

Next we were drinking pomegranate juice in a wine cap and we were pretending to drink wine.

At 9:30 when i came back home i was thinking of what i should do at there next time at house i felt really excited and happy and i couldn't wait to go back to there house.             

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