Can He Save Her?

hi this week in writing we had to write a story about this pickcher.

One of the number one greatest villains the Gower was on a plane going to Ackland.  He wanted to make someone go to sleep forever just because he wanted to be the evilest and baddest villain of all time.  

 The gower is a plamp short villain with small green eyes and dirty blond hair with green hair spray.   

He picked a tall thin women that had long wavy red hair and big green eyes.    

As the wind began to grow the woman  pleaded for morse but the gower had no morse and  pusht the woman out of the plan. Spiderman one of the number one greatest heros soor what was taking place.

When the gower left spiderman rast down and grabd the woman by her waist and took her back up to safety 

Description Writing

Description Writing

By Aveen

On this screen there is a pitcher in this pitcher there is a …

Forest in this forest there is a solid icy freezing  blue frozen lake that is as freezing as the north pole and as blue as sapphires and on the right hand sad there is a turtle stuck in the ice. Woking on the solid icy freezing  blue frozen lake is the king of winter.

On the left hand sad next two the trees there is a cuddly fluffy white polar bear.

Thor the woods there are same bright lats. Not far away from the lats are two penguins.

As the snow gets heavier and stronger the trees began to get covered buy ice snowflakes and ice crystals.           

My reading for the week

A (KA)

1. Maryanne
2. Dad
3. Mum
4. Cowch
5. Dads work mats

A (KB)

Marryanne

1. Short shtrat orange hair
2. Two or sometimes one small pike bowe
3. Two  big dark eyes
4. Cream light skin
5. Tall
6. fit

B (CB)

Office the local centre of a large business

Evening the period of time at the end of the day, usually from about 6 p.m. to bedtime

Beach run or haul up (a boat or ship) on to a beach

Soccer a form of football played by two teams of eleven players with a round ball which may not be handled during play except by the goalkeeper

A (AA)

1. Short shtrat orange hair
2. Two or sometimes one small pike bowe
3. Two  big dark eyes
4. Cream light skin
5. Tall
6. Fit

A (EA)

I give the text that I am reading this week a 10 out of 10 because it was funny.

Example sentences

At one game dad got a really good view by standing on top of a fence.

But he fell off and broke his arm when I scored the winning goal.

Another time he got a red card from the ref for sounding like a pack of wolves.

C NIC

At the ending of the story Maryanne scored the winning goal and wasn't enberst by her father any more.

But instead of Maryannes team winning and her not being enberst by her father I am going to ….

My ending

Change the ending by not making Maryannes team win and her being mor inberst by her father then every before.

A (ANA)

Happy

Sad

other

The ball was in the other team's goal. My teammates were grinning and hugging me.

Oh, no! My dad and four of his workmates had arrived.

At one game dad got a really good view by standing on top of a fence. But he fell off and broke his arm when I scored the winning goal.

A (NIA)

Every day I wake up all ready to play soccer

Soccer is the best sport

Resens way

Lots of people have gotten famous for playing soccer

Soccer is the most popular sport in the world   

     

   

A (KA)

1. Maryanne
2. Dad
3. Mum
4. Cowch
5. Dads work mats

A (KB)

Marryanne

1. Short shtrat orange hair
2. Two or sometimes one small pike bowe
3. Two  big dark eyes
4. Cream light skin
5. Tall
6. fit

B (CB)

Office the local centre of a large business

Evening the period of time at the end of the day, usually from about 6 p.m. to bedtime

Beach run or haul up (a boat or ship) on to a beach

Soccer a form of football played by two teams of eleven players with a round ball which may not be handled during play except by the goalkeeper

A (AA)

1. Short shtrat orange hair
2. Two or sometimes one small pike bowe
3. Two  big dark eyes
4. Cream light skin
5. Tall
6. Fit

A (EA)

I give the text that I am reading this week a 10 out of 10 because it was funny.

Example sentences

At one game dad got a really good view by standing on top of a fence.

But he fell off and broke his arm when I scored the winning goal.

Another time he got a red card from the ref for sounding like a pack of wolves.

C NIC

At the ending of the story Maryanne scored the winning goal and wasn't enberst by her father any more.

But instead of Maryannes team winning and her not being enberst by her father I am going to ….

My ending

Change the ending by not making Maryannes team win and her being mor inberst by her father then every before.

Description writing

By Aveen

As the sun begins to set the sky turns dark and when it's time for lights out the engine begins to go up.

Then a hundred random buttons began to light and the sky turns orange and yellow the plane is up.

The captain glasses began to shine orange and yellow his grayish brownish hair turns a nice rose gold and as do his pale pink t-shirt.

When the sun begins to raise the stars go away and when it's time to land in Auckland it's also time to say good-bye.

        

Description writing

By Aveen

On a beach of the coast of England are two horse riders from bright fields. Jade and Gabby radding free on there on there horses with the wind blowing their hair. There horses are dark brown fast and big with long soft mans as flowing as a peacock's tail.